Blog 13A

Here are the 3 people whose blogs I reviewed and commented on.

Paul: http://paullind.blogspot.com/

What worked: Rhetorical terms

What needed work: Visual rhetoric

Brandi:  http://dearchild-saywhat.blogspot.com/

What worked: Visual rhetoric

What needed work: Writing process

Geena: http://geenagrossenglish.blogspot.com/

What worked: visual rhetoric

What needed work: Classification and division